Before moving on to the next topic in detail, take a look at the image together with my editing suggestion
Image #1: This is a really good example of how something
which is not difficult can be made to look difficult. It’s
exactly the kind of “minefield” that I’ve mentioned in earlier posts. It’s
filled with blah, blah, blah and words such as exophoric and
cataphora and deictic that sound like medical problems. What is
being said in that paragraph is not wrong, but how it is being said
gives the impression you’re about to climb a mountain. You need none of it.
The words
we’ll look at are: is, ea and id.
For now, all
you need to know is:
is: he
ea: she
id: it
Image #2
tells you what to do with image #1
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